Attempt at a Supernatural Fic /Teaser only

Well, as i mentioned earlier , i started writing again. I have many ideas.. Some short stories are already completed, but i just wanna try to make a longer one. I find them more interesting and challenging.

But i don't know if this particular idea is worth pursueing. It will probably be Season 1 fic since at least in the begining i won't use any John allusions,but i am not sure. Maybe he will come up maybe he wont.
I also want to introduce a new character, a woman about their age with abilities not exaclty like Sam's but different.
Anyhow, i have started writing it and i have written more. But this is just a teaser.
It's not very long and i just want to hear what you guys think and maybe give me some suggestions.

So if you have some time read on -it's short- and let me know what you think.

Supernatural – How Angry Spirits Are Born

Part One: “Beneath your skin”
( How Angry Spirits Are Born )